Review about Monsters

I think the movie was boring because there wasn't much killing and it was a short movie too watch. Toward the end was good but there was no killing then and they should of carried on the story a bit more until Sam and the man both of them got home and can have more action like them aliens killing people and them two being attacked by the aliens but they be lucky enough to lose them and survive. What was good is when that man was taking photo of everything this shows that he has captured everything on his journey with Sam in the movie.You can tell by the rating of 6.4 that it wasn't such a good movie after all. The story line was about Six years after Earth has suffered an alien invasion a cynical journalist agrees to escort a shaken American tourist through an infected zone in Mexico to the safety of the US border.

my Target

To make a script for my story and 1 dialogue for each scene.    

The Troublemaker

1. EXT. STREET. DAY.

Max, wayne and Adam are walking down the street.

Max runs into a shop and runs out with a stolen football. They all run away, shopkeeper tries to chase them but they are too fast for him.

2. EXT.MAINROAD.DAY. 
 Max, wayne and Adam are kicking the ball around down the main road.

Max and wayne were kicking the ball around when the ball was set up to Adam then Adam kicked the ball high in the air and the ball broke the car window and the car alarm went off. 

3. EXT.MAINROAD.NIGHT
 Max, wayne and Adam run away later the man come out of the shop and look at his car.

later the car had a big hole in the window and there was a football in the car seat. After the man came out of the shop then when he saw the state of his car he was really angry then shouted out like a animal saying NOOOO.

4. EXT.MAINROAD.EVENING

when the man made a phone call the taxi then came five minutes later the taxi came and he went in the taxi. After he made the phone call the scene went back to the troublemakers who broke the man car window.


5. EXT.PARK.EVENING
Next Max, wayne and Adam are talking about how fun it was breaking the man window that was so cool but it was realy funny when he shouted out like a gorilla and yeah said wayne i couldnt stop laughing myself cant wait until we cause some more trouble tommorrow. Then Adam and 1 goes home and had a big rest until the next day to cause some bigger trouble this time.


6. EXT.TOWN.DAY
Finally it was the next day when Max, wayne and Adam meeten up in City Centre Town but this time they did something different.This time max broke the shopping mall window, when they did a man who was the security of the shopping mall chased after them but because they were to fast he couldn't keep up with them.


7. EXT.MAINROAD.DAY
So the security man left max and his two friends go when they ran onto the main road. Suddenley they got ran over by a big truck and they were splatered flat on the road when there wasnt no chance to be alive.

Our movie is about a person who is a total idiot who has two of his friends with him doing stupid things around the whole city causing trouble for example they stole a football from sports direct and two of them were kicking the ball around,when all of a sudden they kicked the ball high in the air out of nowhere the car alarm went off. Later the car window had a big hole in it and there was a football inside it, when the man look at his car he was so angry that he shouted out loud like a animal saying NOOOO.

Next is when the man made a phone call and he phoned the taxi. After he made the phone call the scene went back to the people who broke his car window saying how fun it was breaking that man car window that was so cool but it was really funny when he shouted out like a gorilla. yeah said the other person i couldnt stop laughing myself cant wait until we cause some more trouble tommorrow. The other person said ok then he goes home and rest when it was the next day to cause some big trouble.

Finally it was the next day when max and his two friends meet up in City Centre (town), but this time they did something different. This time they broke a shopping mall window, when they did a man who was the security of the shopping mall chased after them. They were so fast that the security man couldnt keep up with them.So he left them runing on to the main road when suddenley out of nowhere the big truck ran all three of them over and they were splatted dead on that road and they had no chance to survive.

CHARACTER PROFILE QUESTIONS

• What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname? Max
• How old is your character throughout the majority of the story? 16
• What is their date of birth? 4/10/1995
• What is their place of birth? Walsgrave Hospital
• Are they male or female? Male
• Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed? Single
• Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? Sister
• What is your character's overall health like? Healthy
• What type of personality does your character have? Anger problems
• What is their Ethnic background and religion? Christian
• What is their current occupation? Works at Toys r us
• What level of education does your character have? Level 3
• What does your character like or love? football Ps3 fat food
• What does your character dislike or hate? vegetables

The troublemakers (script)

The Troublemaker

1. EXT. STREET. DAY.

Max age 14, wayne age 15 and Adam age 16 are walking down the street.

Max runs into a shop and runs out with a stolen football. They all run away, shopkeeper tries to chase them but they are too fast for him.

Max:

watch me run into the shop and rob a football.

Wayne:

Ok then me and Adam will be waiting outside for you.

Max: 

Wayne and Adam come lets run with the ball hurry up there a shopkeeper after us.

Shopkeeper: 

 When i grip you three your goner get it from me boy. Oh no they got away hope i dont lose my job, THIS AINT OVER YOU KNOW.

2. EXT.MAINROAD.DAY. 
 Max age 14, wayne age 15 and Adam age 16 are kicking the ball around down the main road.

Max and wayne were kicking the ball around when the ball was set up to Adam then Adam kicked the ball high in the air and the ball broke the car window and the car alarm went off.

Max: 

Yes we lost him there no danger now so lets carry on.

Wayne: 

phew that was close yes max set the ball up to Adam so he can kick high in the air.

Adam: 

Im open pass it (ball goes high in the air) yes finally broke something. Were that loud noise coming from man its so loud.

3. EXT.MAINROAD.NIGHT
 Max age 14, wayne age 15 and Adam age 16 run away later the man come out of the shop and look at his car.

later the car had a big hole in the window and there was a football in the car seat. After the man age 24 0came out of the shop then when he saw the state of his car he was really angry then shouted out like a animal saying NOOOO. 

 All of them:

Lets get out of here before we get caught.

Man:

What has happened to my car who responsible for this don't you people know how expensive this car is. I'm goner kill whoever done this is to my car is going to be in a lot of trouble. NO this can't be happening ARGH.

4. EXT.MAINROAD.EVENING

when the man age 24 made a phone call the taxi then came five minutes later the taxi came and he went in the taxi. After he made the phone call the scene went back to the troublemakers who broke the man car window.

Man:

Hello can i have a taxi please coming to spon street in city centre and how long would the wait be 10 min ok bye.

5. EXT.PARK.EVENING

Next  age 24 Max age 14, wayne age 15 and Adam age 16 are talking about how fun it was breaking the man age 24 window that was so cool but it was realy funny when he shouted out like a gorilla and yeah said wayne age 15 i couldnt stop laughing myself and i cant wait until we cause some more trouble tommorrow. Then Adam age 16 and 1 goes home and had a big rest until the next day to cause some bigger trouble this time.

Max:

today was a lot of fun wen be broke the mans car window.

Wayne and Aadam:

 Yeh it was a lot of fun and i can't wait until tomorrow.

Max:

 yeh but it was really funny when the man shouted out loud like a gorilla.

Wayne:

Me too i couldn't even stop laughing myself but i can't wait untill tomorrow to cause more trouble like today.

Aadam:

We goner have a lot of fun tomorrow. Well i have to go home now come on max lets go and wayne see you tomorrow.

Wayne:

Yeh kool see you tomorrow aswell and later max bye.

6. EXT.TOWN.DAY

Finally it was the next day when Max, wayne and Adam meeten up in City Centre Town but this time they did something different.This time max broke the shopping mall window, when they did a man who was the security of the shopping mall chased after them but because they were to fast he couldn't keep up with them.

Max:

 You guys are ready.

Wayne and Adam:

Yes here take the brick and smash that shopping mall window.

Max:

Get ready to run , yes got the window and all of it broken and come on lets go guys the security guard is after us.

Man: 

STOP RUNING i am not going to hurt you...  thats it i had enough of you carrying on you guys are going to be in a lot of trouble if you don't stop. Oh no which way did they go!

Max:

you two stop i think we lost him feww that was a close one , but it was hell a lot of fun. 

 7. EXT.MAINROAD.DAY

So the security man left max and his two friends go when they ran onto the main road. Suddenley they got ran over by a big truck and they were splatered flat on the road when there wasnt a chance of surviving

Max:

this way you guys onto the main road come on hurry , oh no watch out.

All of them:

 AAAHHH.................. EEEERRRR

Our movie is about a person who is a total idiot who has two of his friends with him doing stupid things around the whole city causing trouble for example they stole a football from sports direct and two of them were kicking the ball around,when all of a sudden they kicked the ball high in the air out of nowhere the car alarm went off. Later the car window had a big hole in it and there was a football inside it, when the man look at his car he was so angry that he shouted out loud like a animal saying NOOOO.

Next is when the man made a phone call and he phoned the taxi. After he made the phone call the scene went back to the people who broke his car window saying how fun it was breaking that man car window that was so cool but it was really funny when he shouted out like a gorilla. yeah said the other person i couldnt stop laughing myself cant wait until we cause some more trouble tommorrow. The other person said ok then he goes home and rest when it was the next day to cause some big trouble.

Finally it was the next day when max and his two friends meet up in City Centre (town), but this time they did something different. This time they broke a shopping mall window, when they did a man who was the security of the shopping mall chased after them. They were so fast that the security man couldnt keep up with them.So he left them runing on to the main road when suddenley out of nowhere the big truck ran all three of them over and they were splatted dead on that road and they had no chance to survive.

Is the world going to end in 2012 ?

Most people have heard about people talking that the world is going to end in 2012.But there has been a movie made for this, saying that this will happened in 2012 but most people do not believe in this. Some scientist say that 2012 prediction about the end of this world is so ridiclous there has been a lot of chaos over this because of people getting information on the interent saying about this and the movie has been made to frighten people about what is going to happen in 2012. But this movie had been made by the Roland Emmerich who made other movie similar to this one The day after tommorrow which was made in 2004 then he came up with 2012 and made that 5 years later. 2012 is not the end of the world, Mayan elder insists and some people say that this can be true you know. This will affect baby who were just born because if this was real then they would have a really bad future.